I walk to learn to become one
Within my own skin
Immeasurable distance
A path designed by the stars
A solo journey
Of my own free will
My steps fall into place
At my own pace –
Try not to keep up with me
For I am my own tree
My branches –
Strengthen me
Guide me
Shelter me
Grow with me.
Photo Credit: kurt.stocker Flickr via Compfight cc
Noble sentiment: Marcus Aurelius-like delivered deftly with a delicately deceptive dying fall (plea?) in the last line–kind of ironic and pleasing in its urgent ambiguity.
I like it.
Good work.
Thank you, Doriowen. I’m glad that you loved it.
Love this, Valerie. Minimalism at its finest. xoD.