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Woman With Pen
My daddy says there are two Kim’s,
The one with pen and the one without.
I told him the “Real” Kim has pen—
Where she becomes wholly herself, where she
is set free, wild, unashamed.
She is a feral cat.
The one with pen is uninhibited, excessive, wears
Too much red lipstick. When she begins to
Write, she is Lady Gaga with a different kind
Of voice. Words slide down her throat all
Day long. She has untold stories waiting
In line like consumers on Black Friday.
She is a warrior.
My daddy says the woman with pen
Should fuse with the other, should
Become one, should melt into each
Other’s arms. I guess that’s what we
All struggle to become, to be, to evolve into…
Walking into the world as broken, beautiful
Enough, and in full bloom…
Exactly as we are.
I like your poem. It tells me a lot about how the woman with the pen sees herself or how she wants to be seen but what of the “woman without the pen”?
Who is she?
Does Daddy like her slightly more than “women with pen” or do I read too much into this? Do I see sub-layers to this poem that don’t exist?
I’d like to know more about her; she who is the real person who lives, walks and talks.
This is a good poem for the very reason that it raises these questions.
You are amazing and are helping make the world more hopeful and beautiful with your pen!
So true Kim.
You are this woman, changing lives, a woman with a voice, a voice we love to hear and read.
I agree, it’s hard to be all in one. With a pen I feel I can be everything.
Hold on both Kim. One day, you’ll do even more amazing things!
I am so proud of you, plnting seeds of awareness is so important, thank you. xoxo
ggnnkim@yahoo.com
Love you Kimmy!!!❤️
And the one with pen is powerful, changing lives and giving hope to those who have no voice.
You’re words are always so beautiful and honest. So pure and soulful. Thank you for sharing your heart with the world. xoxo
I love the Kim with the pen just as much as Kim without the pen, put them both together and you have a super Kim
I always look forward to your pen painting such stunning visuals!! xoxo elizabeth